Sunday, 6 December 2015

MGA 549

"Brother Tianyi wants you to tell Chu Feng the sky is turning dark[I think what they meant is it's getting late or a bad sign?会天黑]." Jiang Wushang anxiously saying.

"Yes, this time you are going to make a long and wearisome journey, choosing the right time to embark is crucial, if we miss today it is going to be really a pity." In fact, many people somewhat were anxious.

They prepared to leave in the morning to send Chu Feng and crew but noon had already passed.

At that moment the people saw that the dawn was starting to approach and they couldn't help but feel repressed?

"Tianyi quickly call Chu Feng, don't make everyone wait."

Seeing the Azure Dragon Founder speak Tianyi nodded and quickly replied

"Em"



*Wind Noises*

Abruptly, three rainbow lights shot forward in the direction of the main hall and landing down with a crater.Two girls and a young boy emerged from the dust.

The bystanders stood there with their face in awe and then they beamed with happiness.

Standing there between Chu Feng's sides were the two girls Su Mei and Su Rou.

The two girls currently wore the Strange Armament skirts that Chu Feng had gave them.Su Mei wearing her pink colored skirt and Su Rou wearing her green skirt made them seem like Goddesses that had descended from heaven.

Right now Chu Feng standing in between both of them surrounded by Su Mei and Su Rou's arms endured with his willpower to abstain from doing the taboo *** [yes those asterisks were on the raws]"Not good looks like I'm late."

"Little Rou, Little Mei, you woke up, you woke up!!"

A middle-aged man rushed forward, was none other than their father with a face full of tears.

"Sisters you finally awoke"

"Good, good"

 Their brother and sister-in-law, ran over.Being able to see their own family made Su Rou and Su Mei feel excited.

In fact. seeing that Su Rou and Su Mei waking up, everyone was very happy and relieved.But from the bottom of their hearts, they were happy for Chu Feng.

Some faces were happy and some were awkwardly confused but Su Rou and Su Mei's condition is not something everyone knows.

For example, Jiang Wushang had a puzzled [满头雾水] look on his face tapped the shoulder of Tianyi and whispered: "Brother Tianyi, who are these beautiful girls and why is Brother Chu Feng so acting so intimate with them?".

"Ha, almost forgot that you don't know"A faint smile appeared on Tianyi's face while narrating Su Rou and Su Mei's relationship with Chu Feng.

After Tianyi had finished explaining, Jiang Wushang looked towards Chu Feng with envy and frustratingly he exclaimed:"Why is Brother Chu Feng so good in love?"

"Chu Feng the sky is turning dark you should embark as soon as possible." Looking at the sky the Azure Dragon Founder urged him.

"Em"Chu Feng nodded in agreement and went to Jiang Wushang and Zhang Tianyi.

"Brother Zhang and younger Brother Wushang, Little Rou and Little Mei wishes to travel with us to the Eastern Sea Region will you allow them to come along?"

"Certainly" Tianyi and Jiang Wushang replied while lightly nodding.

Jiang Wushang then used the Strange Armament Chariot gate,signaling for Chu Feng to go in and said: "Brother Chu Feng my Strange Armament is not suited for combat but the boons of it is that not only does it travel fast but it is very comfortable and spacious."

"Inside there are 3 rooms,the biggest room which I usually use has a big bed which I like sleeping on, but I'll give it to you now, hehe, enjoy"When he spoke the words the corners Jiang Wushang's mouth briefly twisted into a perverse and obscene smile before changing into a radiant smile.

Chu Feng just gave a calm smile and said "Brother Wushang this is great".

Thereupon, Chu Feng, Su Mei, Su Rou, Zhang Tianyi and Jiang Wushang, the five, entered the Strange Armament Chariot and departed from the Nine Provinces mainland and proceeded to the Eastern Sea Region's Four Seas Academy.

"I don't really know what kind of achievements these children will show us"Watching the Strange Armament Chariot fly away in the horizon, the Jiang Old Ancestor deeply sighed.

"Relax, these children's abilities, all greatly surpasses me, even if it's the Eastern Sea Region, they will definitely have great achievements." Azure Dragon Founder lightly smiled.

---Inside the chariot/carriage ---

When evening came, Chu Feng encountered a helpless situation.

Chu Feng lying down on the bed, Su Rong gently smiled and her icy voice said: "Before getting married,give up any perverted ideas about me and my younger sister."

"If Little Rou doesn't want to, the ground is very cold you know."Teasingly looked to Su Rong said.

Then Su Mei sweetly smiled and said "Elder Sister said that she will tear the bed apart and leave you outside."

"Ok..."Chu Feng's face brimmed with disappointment, then helplessly sigh then smiled again.

Actually Chu Feng did not want to have any perverted thoughts towards the two girls but as long as he can see them happy Chu Feng is contented.

"Chu Feng now since you are already a Blue Cloak World Spiritist and you are going to step into the Eastern Sea Region, when I want to swap over, help you seek the law of the arteries[??I could use some help here cant understand this(交你寻法脉)]"Eggy's voiced drifted as Chu Feng was about to fall asleep.


5 comments:

  1. not bad.
    but the first paragraph i think it should be
    "Chu Feng, Brother Tianyi said the sky is turning dark."
    in the second and third i cant quite point it out where the mistakes are but 70-80% accurate

    "Sisters you finally woke up!"
    "good! good!"
    Their brother and sister-in-law, ran over.Being able to see their own family made Su Rou and Su Mei feel excited.

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    1. Thanks for your feedback!

      The first paragraph is weird cause the author didn't specify who said it but later we can see that Chu Feng hadn't arrived yet.

      As for the errors I'll amend them when I'm done with the next chapter

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    2. aight!
      by the way if you want a cleaner or grammar checker just contact me :)

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    3. Alright Thanks for your support!

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  2. for the "law of the arteries" i think eggy is referring to the ability she mentioned a while back which was the World Pulse ability to help locate cultivation resources. don't remember exactly what chapter on the wuxia site it was though.

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